Answer: Steinbeck introduces the family by describing their deplorable living conditions. He then describes the filth that can be found within their makeshift dwelling. In paragraph 3, he says: “The tent is full of flies clinging to the apple box that is the dinner table, buzzing about the foul clothes of the children, particularly the baby, who has not been bathed nor cleaned for several days.” In the next paragraph, he states: “There is no toilet here, but there is a clump of willows nearby where human feces lie exposed to the flies–the same flies that are in the tent.” In paragraphs 5-7, he proceeds to describe the four-year-old boy who dies from convulsions. The sequence of events that Steinbeck describes leads the reader to the conclusion that these squalid living conditions, combined with a poor diet, have contributed to the boy’s death.
Answer: In paragraph 6, the meaning of the phrase “one step down,” which is used in conjunction with the four-year-old boy’s death, is not apparent until Steinbeck writes about the lower-class family, in paragraph 14. This second family has suffered a number of deaths. In paragraphs 20-21, we learn that the mother has given birth to a baby that was born dead; another child, “born less than a year ago, lived a week.” In addition, a three-year-old child suffers from malnutrition and likely “will die in a very short time.” These deaths are the result of a lack of proper nutrition, and now that the “middle-class” family has also lost a child for the same reason they are “one step down,” or closer to becoming “lower-class” migrant workers.
Answer: Steinbeck writes in paragraph 7 that with the boy’s “death there came a change of mind in his family. The father and mother now feel that paralyzed dullness with which the mind protects itself against too much sorrow and too much pain.” In the next paragraph he writes that as a result, “this father will not be able to make a maximum of four hundred dollars a year any more because he is no longer alert. . . . His spirit is losing caste rapidly.” According to paragraph 9, the “dullness shows in the faces of this family, and in addition there is a sullenness that makes them taciturn.” Also, in paragraph 10, the children, who are dressed in rags, will not go to school because they are “scorned” when they get there. Important transition words and phrases in paragraphs 7-10 include: caused, now, because, in addition, and sometimes.
Answer: Steinbeck describes in paragraph 13 the “middle-class” family just before it slips into the “lower class” He claims that “[D]ignity is all gone, and spirit has turned into sullen anger before it dies.” Clearly, the life is seeping out of these people. Vivid details bolster Steinbeck’s argument that poverty is a slow death; it is the death of the self-respect people have when they can take care of themselves and their children and pay their own way.
Answer: Steinbeck does not depict the conditions he describes vividly or emotionally. He lets the facts speak for themselves as a journalist does. In paragraph 21, he states that after the mother’s baby was born dead, “the mother rolled over and lay still for two days.” In paragraph 20, he says that the three-year-old suffering from malnutrition “will die in a very short time.” These are clear, almost matter-of-fact statements that readers can understand; we all feel compassion when we hear that someone has lost a child or is dying. By presenting these details as just another event in a series of days and weeks, Steinbeck shows the reader how the events feel to those experiencing them. A lack of drama or commentary may also make these details seem more believable–more like real life–to the reader.